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9th January 2008, 02:39 AM | #1 |
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yay my newest model.... -RIFLE
Well here I am, back
After my beautiful biplane, I decided to start working on something better, and I play this game called Tremulous and some friends and I are working on a mod for it, and I decided to redo their rifle. So after a lot of work by a beginner modeler, here is the UNTEXTURED first draft!!! Woo, I know it isn't polished, but that's part of the reason why I am showing it, so that people could give as much feedback as possible. Also I know it looks a bit fuzzy, but that's because I copied it into MS Paint, so it is not exactly I high detail photo. It is a based off of a proposed new military semi automatic rifle, and the U.S. Military's new test rifle, the xm8. Also, again, as much feedback as possible is encouraged! So... Here it is:
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9th January 2008, 04:09 PM | #2 |
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Re: yay my newest model.... -RIFLE
looks good
maybe you could adjust the shoulder rest so it is not so sharp on the subdivisions
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9th January 2008, 07:46 PM | #3 |
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Re: yay my newest model.... -RIFLE
Very, very nice model, it's a considerable improvement!
I absolutely love the XM8, I've drawn a lot of inspiration from that rifle over the last few years. Do you think it'll ever go into production?
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Thanks a lot! I think I read somewhere that the xm8 was canceled, but it looks very cool, so I hope something like it will be used.
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Re: yay my newest model.... -RIFLE
Leave it to those stupid Bureaucrats out in Washington to cancel yet another good thing...
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10th January 2008, 10:41 AM | #6 |
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Re: yay my newest model.... -RIFLE
Great model...
I have a question, what about the line of site for the aiming rectile. It looks like your line of sight is obstructed with the carrying handle? Just curious... |
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