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I did another render on this picture. I tryed to get some sunrays, and at the same time did some small changes. I think this turned out pretty ok more or less.
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This is a great scene / render Thor
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Great improvement on that scene. I think you could benefit a lot with more depth on the scene. I don't know about carrara, if you have a Zpath/Zbuffer... to get the background 10/20% lighter. If you did the sunrays with a volumetric light, then it means you can maybe add something like fog or distance fog? Anyhow, great work, keep it comming :-D |
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Thanks luuckyy. The rays are actually postwork shtl. I noticed now that the babe in the door looks a bit to small in my opinion. Think I'll make her bigger. Not sure about the zbuffer thingy. have to check. With the background, do you mean the buildings?
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Yup I mean the buildings.
Wow sunrays by hand! though task ^^ Zbuffer, or Zpass, it's a depth (Z axis) pass that help give.. depth (^^) in images (or dof, or watever). Actually they are thousand ways to do it. You can even make it postwork indeed. As for imho the girl as a perfect size. Well, actually in my head the shuttles are pretty big. They can charge light battle suites.... Anyway, I did spot her Nice like this: subtle. But ahm, it's just thoughts... might be wrong ;-) Your image |
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The sunrays wasent that dificult actually. Took about 2 min to make. And dof I can do. btw, how is "homeworld security" written in french?
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The best (closest to the english) translation is "la sécurité du monde d'origine" ... but it's a little bit ugly and strange for a french sentence IMO, it depends of what you need it for actually ...
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Hmm, that was a bit long. I tryed Babelfish first, and it gave me "sécurité de homeworld". But I thought, that cant be right. Homeworld security is a little play on homeland security. Is it anything else I could say around that theme? Security and homeworld?
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The idea behind "homeworld" is "the world where you're born" right ? So ... "monde natal" could also be an acceptable french translation I suppose.
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Next try. Think I need a new mask to the shuttles. Didnt turn out quite right in the edges.
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